Monthly Archives: November 2009

Lit Agent Synchronicity – Comparing Your Novel

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publishing2Today, both Nathan Bransford and Ask Daphne address the perennial query letter dilemma: to invoke the master/bestseller comparison or no?

Daphne points out that this “kind of shorthand” is how a lot of agents pitch books to editors … but you run the risk of alienating an agent who despises the author whose work you compare yours to.

Nathan, on the other hand, advises the querying author to seek the middle ground between trying to coat-tail on a bestseller and comparing your book to something so obscure that you might stump the agent.

Both are good blog posts, from people who know.  Check ’em out.

November is my PerShoStoWriMo

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LiganStoneRather than merely jumping on the NaNoWrimo IntNoWaMo bandwagon, or impotently griping about its drag on the business and art of writing, I decided to conduct a more useful and effective exercise during November: composing a carefully written short story in the same world as The Ligan of the Disomus.

This stream of activity had several inspirational tributaries.

First: considering how Ligan ends (sorry, no spoiler for those who weren’t among the first-readers) I wanted to create a venue for “un-mysteries” preceding the Reider Case, fantasy-suspense stories that are also set in Lemaigne with the Observer as narrator.

The working title of this short story is The Crow and the Kinnebeck, but if I do end up writing more short stories of this type I will probably title the entire anthology The Lemaigne Tales : An Observer’s Casebook from the Years 285 – 295 of the Republics.

Second: a character who isn’t outlined to show up until the third novel in the series — a 6’8″ Arborstone backwoodsman named Wm. Ochsard whom the Api Men call “Welkos” the Boar — kept throwing attitude (and dialogue) in my direction, refusing to be patient for his introduction. Once I decided to write a short story, he planted a giant deerskin boot in the middle of it and refused to budge.

And, once the story comes out, you’ll see that he is not a man to take “wait a bit” for an answer.

Third: my attempts to write an essay about my writerly vision in creating the Observer’s world were coming off clumsy and biographical.  And, no I do not mean auto-biographical.  The scraps were beginning to sound like someone else writing about my writing years after my death.  There was a “this is what Bob Dole stands for” sense of weird self-reference that was throwing off my game.

So, unhappy with the exposition, I found myself slipping the vision underneath Ochsard’s story of murder and revenge, embedding the clues, hints, nudges, and winks in the language itself so that primarily other writers, bookish types, and critics would notice.

So, November is my Personal Short Story Writing Month.  Current wordcount?  Only two thousand; pretty meager by NaNoWriMo standards.

Current progress?  Plot outlined, psychological and philosophical conflicts identified, eight sections defined by imagery and event, major character interactions popping like corn in a hoose kettle, action sequences choreographed in draft, organizing theme and symbolism nearly complete, and the Observer grumpily plodding through the ramblings and rowdiness of Lemaigne’s corrupted denizens.

Archaic Definition of the Week

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publishingfacinorous. Extremely wicked, infamous; grossly criminal.  The word, naturally, is accented on the sin.

Dictionary of Early English by Joseph T. Shipley (1955).

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Ancient Trail Reaches Back to the Ice Age

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Post-Ice-Age-EuropeHere is a story that piques my interest in hiking and my love for ancient history.  The New York Times Travel section features England’s Ridgeway Trail, which is “at least 5,000 years old, and may even have existed when England was still connected to continental Europe, and the Thames was a tributary of the Rhine.”

It’s hard to beat a hiking path that predates the very shape of the world.

Here is my favorite passage from the article:

Every so often we pass one of the distinctive clumps of beech trees that dot the landscape. There’s something about these copses: when you’re in one, its whistling shade is eerie and beautiful, steeped in a sense of another time, of history, of the age of the landscape. They have something of the dense atmosphere of a graveyard … The grasslands up here, beloved of sheep and horses, curve away in sculptural lines, creating deep bowls and broad gullies. It’s a landscape that exhales prehistory, littered with burial mounds, standing stones and hill forts thousands of years old.

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Comfort and Violence

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publishing2How’s this for some publishing juxtaposition?

On Friday, Washington Post‘s sextegenarian, Pulitzer Prize-winning “Style” editor Henry Allen tackled a writer and started punching him in the face after the guy tried to deflate a conflict over a story by suggesting Allen “not be such a c—sucker.”  Can’t imagine why that didn’t work.

But if pressroom combat isn’t your thing, perhaps you should relax by reserving a room at New York City’s Library Hotel, where each floor has six book-stuffed rooms organized according to the Dewey Decimal System. 

If they give you a choice between room 800.001 and room 1100.005 for your romantic get-away, definitely pick the former.

He's Not Yet Ready To Turn The Page

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publishingDavid Mehegan spans the centuries at the Boston Globe with a great piece on the genesis of books in Christian codices, the prophesied end of books in electronic Kindle-kin, and the psychological relationship between booklessness and physical nudity. 

 

(Given an either/or choice, take my clothes and leave me the books.)

More Philip Roth Wrath

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publishingOk, so maybe “wrath” is a strong word to describe JK Evanczuk’s five-point refutation of Roth’s assertion that the novel would end up a cult item within a quarter century, but I was glad to see someone take on the positive arguments in favor of novel survival.  (I satisfied myself with picking apart Roth’s logic.)

Thanks to Dystel & Goderich Literary Management for pointing me to Evanczuk’s blog.

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